hi , please review my FIRST website , thanks

[greekhand]

Hi everybody this is my first website about Chinses poker
i will be glad if you could give me some tips , thanks .

[edmc]

Clean looking site. 10 times better than my first attempt.

Not enough content so far.

You are doubling up on your internal links.

Find yourself a list of sites that play chinese poker


http://www.chinesepoker101.com/Chine...esAndTips.aspx

you are making all the headings on the page h2 - probably not a good idea

[greekhand]

Hi , edmc .

i know i still don't have enough content .

i disagreed about too much internal links .

im already on approval on some poker room that offer Chinese poker ....

i agree about the <h2> problem , i just didn't had a better solution , for seo and the users .

Thanks alot .

[greekhand]

Hi , edmc .

i know i still don't have enough content .

i disagreed about too much internal links .

im already on approval on some poker room that offer Chinese poker ....

i agree about the <h2> problem , i just didn't had a better solution , for seo and the users .

Thanks alot .

[bahh]

Make it look more like a poker site. Now it looks just like a regular blog. Add some pics and banners. Make it look more exciting.

[SunPoker.com]

I would make the copy and links more consistent throughout. For instance, you have some links starting with capital letters, and other with lower case letters. You start a new paragraph in the main copy but do not put a space in between paragraphs.

I would just try to make it look a bit cleaner with the text and provide some more consistency throughout.

Regards,

Mark

[greekhand]

Thanks alot guys .... i also want to know how do you fell about the
name like , what "chinese poker 101" tells you ??

That good name ?? i really want to know , for my next project

Thanks again .

[bahh]

Personally I would try to find a domain doesn't contain numbers. It's better in a SEO point of view.

For me it sound like the site is listing 101 things about Chinese poker.

Originally Posted by greekhand

Thanks alot guys .... i also want to know how do you fell about the
name like , what "chinese poker 101" tells you ??

That good name ?? i really want to know , for my next project

Thanks again .

[SunPoker.com]

I personally thought Chinese Poker 101 was an introductory site dedicated to the game.

Mark

[kaus]

I think like Mark said it needs to be cleaned up a bit. First I would place your sentences into paragraphs instead of starting a new line for each sentence. They look gappy to me. Maybe try and redo some of the content on the home page, right now and no offense I would probably leave. There is nothing attracting my attention and teh first few lines in the intro dont do it.

I would also, since you are promoting Action Poker and from what I have seen is about the only network who supports Chinese Poker include the other games they offer as far as rules go, like Pan (which is a kick ass game when you learn it), showing the uniqueness in game selection. Slip it into your review.

With your strategy break that section up

Distribute the strong cards - A good Chinese poker strategy is that your front should always have a feature where ........ As much as a possible, always have a pair in front to ensure your complete win.

Why? If I dont know anything about Chinese Poker than I am not going to understand that, you want to teach people or give them the basic understanding than explian to them. Each of your subjects can be broken down into new pages---more content.

Good luck

As far as title goes I think I would have went more on learnchinesespoker or playchinesepoker but thats just a preference.