I have taken your suggestions - site #2

[smackinyaup]

That was an awesome post. I think you are dead on with everything you said. I appreciate it very much. I will implement the suggestions as soon as I get my site onto templates. I can't believe I didn't start with templates sooner... If I wanted to change the footer, I opened up about 30 pages and coded it in myself lol.

I am considering re-writing the entire front page intro for SEOness and clarity. Its a little bit of a ramble but if I break it up like you said that may just take care of it.

Good luck to you as well.

-Oh also, what was your FTR nick?

[xpertadvice4u]

Also, get to know your opponents well enough estimate whether a small value bet is best or a full pot sized bet is going to do get the most value.

There is a syntax problem in that sentence: "to estimate" and "to get the most."

A great read, though.

[xpertadvice4u]

They can improve your a lag (loose-aggressive) image

Delete the "a."

A semi bluff can be a regular bet or it can be a raise of someone else’s bet. There are several advantages to using a semi bluff:

They can improve to become a made hand
They can get folds out of other players
They can improve your a lag (loose-aggressive) image; getting more action for you
They can disguise your hand
They can start building a big pot for the times you do hit
They can be used to get free cards

A good place to us a list with bullets.

The following three pages could not be found:
http://www.beatnolimit.com/notplay.html http://www.beatnolimit.com/philosophy.html http://www.beatnolimit.com/articles/monsters.html


"What I mean by that is what flops are likely to have hit what hands."/ Try: "which flops are likely to have hit which hands."

[smackinyaup]

Typos are the most embarrassing thing on a site like mine. Its one thing if you're the angry drunk blogger but quite another if you're telling people you're a smart guy and they should follow your advice with their money on a poker strategy site.

[smackinyaup]

Oh I see I replied at the same time you added some suggestions. I like your bulleted lists suggestions. I'm FTPing the site right now so check back in a couple minutes. You caught that at the perfect time because I just got done "template-ing" the site and was just checking to see if I uploaded everything correctly. Thanks a million!

[xpertadvice4u]

Originally Posted by smackinyaup

Thanks a million!

Hmmm....maybe your advice will turn out to be that valuable!

[smackinyaup]

If were to make a million off the site, I think it would be time for a major PAW freeroll courtesy of SmackinYaUp