Please Review

pompeyrayuk · #1 07-01-2007, 10:42 AM

Can you knowledgable people please review this site for me.

http://www.webspawner.com/users/opt32/index.html

Holyman · #2 07-01-2007, 04:13 PM

Well, you need a better layout and you need to separate everything with different pages.. The site has no real layout to it.. No nav area either..

hubbabubba · #3 07-01-2007, 05:38 PM

Agree with previos comment, have a look at your competition you'll soon see the difference.

Also you won't get far without a proper domain name, they are not expensive nd you may find something that suits your idea.

All the best

cogger · #4 07-02-2007, 01:10 AM

This was the way back about 12 years ago, times have changed. You need you own domain name, no free hosting, and a layout and navigation. Browse other programs to get an idea. There are alot of good ones out there that are clean, simple and to the point

bahh · #5 07-06-2007, 06:19 PM

I would recommende Dreamhost if youre looking for hosting. They are cheap and the support is absolutley top notch. Search on google for discount code that can give you up to $97 discount.

DealerDan · #6 07-07-2007, 02:01 PM

No offense, but probably one of the worst pages I've seen submitted for review here. No domain name, no structure to the page, content all over the place with no one focus....if you're hoping to make money out of this, you really have to rethink everything.

losercore · #7 07-07-2007, 02:13 PM

This is not to the original poster. Just a general rant.

A word to ALL people trying to get into an online business, but poker for sure, BUY A DOMAIN NAME ($8) and BUY A YEARS HOSTING ($40 or less even)

Less than $50 and you have a site and a whole year to make $50 for a $2 ROI

I'm actually sick of the people trying to make money with nothing in this business. it does not work that way anymore and you need to invest some money to make some money and then re-invest some more,

Everybody has to start somewhere I will give you that. But a .com is like $8 and some .info's are like $2 to register for a year. There is no excuse to not have a domain and hosting. If you can't afford it you need to find another business like being a paperboy or something.

Now to the OG:
You really need a point to your site. Get a domain, host it, find a reason for people to visit your site as opposed to the tens of 1,000's already out there and work day and night till you are making enough money to be happy with.

kaus · #8 07-07-2007, 04:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by losercore

If you can't afford it you need to find another business like being a paperboy or something.
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That's funny

That is really...overwhelming to look at. First appearnace was I thought it was a massive Party banner or something that was way to big to even fit the screen.

In all honesty to many banners,

No actual layout at all

And all material has been copied.

Pomp I have seen many of your sites before and read many of the posts you make on forums,the mass majority of these are all the same. Doing the same thing over and over again is not going to make it any better, bring people to your site. People remeber certain things that they read on forums, I know I do. There areposts that you have made here, you made on my forum and I read them elsewhere that are all the exact same. You need to come up with something new. Not trying to sound harsh or cynical cause I mean I am still learning to, but after seeing stuff over and over,you start to ignore it.

Randy · #9 07-07-2007, 05:58 PM

I'd rather see someone with a free domain and free hosting post real content than see someone buy a host and a domain and launch another banner farm with nothing but sales pitches.

bahh · #10 07-07-2007, 08:11 PM

Randy-> well in this case I dont know. This site really reminds me of the first websites we were making in the early 90ies..