Opinons please

[kaus]

Ok I am not finished yet, I have alot of linking to do for all my pages and need to complete the news and profile section. My reviews and articles are complete but still need to be linked. I have some more information to add to the right hand column but am debating on if it should be ads for say software products or what ..so anyone who promotes these kinds of items and want to make a suggestion by all means.

I would love some feedback for what I have done so far. Please remember I know absoloutly nothing about any of this process and have been reading tutorials for instructions. That being said any comments that suggest improvement would you please emphasize for me so I know exactly what you are talking about. I am throwing this up so if any major changes need to be done I can do so now.

Thanks all for taking teh time to read this and here is the link

http://pokerriveronline.com

[NewPokerGirl]

Hey...well to me the green is kinda hard on the eyes. At first I thought the article in the green section were those sponsored ads you see on freehosting sites. I hear blue is a very nice color for websites.

[xpertadvice4u]

Looks nice and sharp to me.
That was a *free* template???
You must have some good tutorials! Care to recommend some?

Sorry, only thing I am competent to advise you on is typos:

"Sun Poker is giving it away to thier (their) best HORSE player. Every player that earns 50,000 MPP’s (MPPs)during the One Sick Promo will be eligible to play in a freeroll to win a seat in the H.O.R.S.E. Hell if that's not good enough they are giving away the most extravagant WSOP packages you will find anywhere. Literally we are talking private jets, accomadations (accomodations) at the Sun Mansion"

If it were me, I would change the last two sentences to:

"Hell - if that's not good enough - they are giving away the most extravagant WSOP packages you will find anywhere - Literally! We are talking private jets and accomodations at the Sun Mansion!"

[kaus]

yes I seen them I thought I had gone through all of my pages and used the spell check. There are quite a few touch ups that need to take place, but I wanted to get some insight first with the layout and all. Thanks for taking a peek....

lol yes it was a free template till I tore it apart lol

[losercore]

Using IE7 things seem to not line up. you've got a table on the right side messing it up. The "news" link is off and the right table is all blended together.

Your style sheet looks ok but for some reason you have a CSS and a style within the html. Having both defeats the purpose of a CSS.

Anyway it looks nice except for those few glitches.

By all means get in there and fix your title tags though. You want your tilte tags to have good keywords for search terms that the page is offering.

Looking good

[edmc]

the text is overlapping a little on my browser (Updates) 2nd article running into the 1st.

Just personal preference but Id like to see the same section blending in with your page title/header.

In general the content looks clearly laid out, as for the site banners, ive went off the use of them a little but im opting for more bland or simple logo style banners

[kaus]

Ok so lastnight I thought I would go ahead and move things around abit....ya that was a mistake in a half especially since it was my index page. So long story short I took some of the suggestions and redid the thing (after almost throwing my computer from serious frustrations)and would like to hear what you think. The content is done it needs to be added after I go and redesign those pages to. I know the Site Navigator button is slightly out of place, and all links and bonus codes do need to be added......enough rambling I will wait for judgement

http://www.pokerriveronline.com

and my title tag is still screwed up so mind that

[haynesey]

looks really nice, IMO.
Maybe change the header image, fairly hard to read "Poker River Online".

[NewPokerGirl]

Its really clean looking now...good work!

[kaus]

Thank you