Hi Donk,
Nice article - Just a couple of thoughts on the intro and ending structures.
- Always good to have a first line that grabs some attention. Rather than going straight into the blind structures I'd be inclined to have something like 'xyz satellites are a fantastic way for players to win a $340 qualifier seat for only a small investment'...
- Next say there are 2 different levels available, introduce the 'issue' of the fast blinds. Then quickly tell them you are about to give them a strategy solution! (you have this but a little long for my taste)
- Strategy part I will not comment on, horses for courses etc etc
- At the end i'd summarize the problem, solution and re-emphasize what a great thing these satellites were, then include the 'call to action' (not too sure what this is from your article!).
To summarize my post: Grab attention, introduce issue + solution to issue in as short a way as possible.... then the '3 T's' - tell 'em what you are going to tell 'em, then tell 'em, and finally tell 'em that you told 'em... finally the call to action comes last.
Just my 2p's worth!
Cheers, Mark
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