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Old 08-29-2007, 03:30 PM
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The template is alright but there are alot of errors on the page

First you haven't closed all your tags
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For beginners it will be better to start from information>how to start section.
Advanced players may found other article pages interesting like playing on poker bonuses, poker rooms reviews with detailed bonus info, clearance rate per hour, etc.
Also your sentances are either partial or do not work, "Advanced players may found"

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You are low limit player(2/4 limit and less) losing money on poker or want to improve your +BB/100?
Not trying to be picky or anything but as a first time visitor that stood out quite a bit.

Add more content, add reviews (your own)with bonus code included but you will need something more than just a chart. Look at other peoples websites to kind of get an idea.
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