[hyacinthgirl]

I don't think there's any need to be so terrible. Graham brought up a lot of points that are right one. You're a beginner, and your site clearly show that, and you came here asking for a review. Just because someone doesn't respond immediately telling you that it's totally awesome or whatever you're looking to hear, you don't have to go off on them. If you think he was being rude, you need to toughen up a little bit. You're getting advice from people who have vastly more experience than yourself and you should try to be a little humble. Take their opinions with a grain of salt and don't lash out or personally attack anyone. So Graham didn't deliver his review for you in a pretty little saccharine pacakage. Big deal. Read between the lines and act like an adult. If you take a step back and swallow your pride, you might find out that there is a lot being offered to you here.

As far as your site goes:
- I would pick a different layout. The one you've got up right now does look cheap and probably turns off a number of people who might otherwise stay longer.
- Work on adding some original content to your page. Right now it seems copied and pasted (some of it is, I know), which makes the whole page feel like it was thrown together. The same people who are going to be searching for your page are going to be sharp enough to tell when something was slapped together to make a dime off an opportunity. Nothing wrong with capitalizing on something, just try to makes sure it doesn't look like that's what you're doing.
- I agree with the formatting. Your text is kind of all over the place and on some pages it spills over to the other "margin" of the background, making it impossible to read.
- Have a friend (or anyeone whose advice you can take without getting defensive) proofread your whole page. It is rife with both spelling and grammatical errors, and therefore difficult to read. A little time fixing those would be well worth it and make your page look about ten times better.

If you're not spamming, you're doing something right if you made decent money last month with poker.com. So look for the positive things and build off of those, and don't take what people say about your website personally- I know the time and effort we put into these things can make us rather attached to them, but you've got to be able to separate criticism of your work and yourself.